Re: 給劉逼!

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※ 引述《uplee (璞你老母)》之銘言: : ※ 引述《uplee (璞你老母)》之銘言: The Man Who Trapped... (In His Depress) I can see through your pretend You fake a smile and try to fade away...just fade away... It's the blood bursts like your tears Ignore the suffer,walk away ...but walk away... You fall and break , but you hide and stand Your silence scream ,but I can't hear you say!(I know you're not okay...) I'M OKAY! And you wipe up all your tears Just tell me that your're Okay...(your're Okay...your're Okay...) You hide the dark inside your pain Turn around and say you're Okay...(your're Okay...your're Okay...) So RUN AWay...so RUN AWay... I know you are not Okay You just drown inside your pain... You are trapped in your depress You try to tell me, but so hard to say...so hard to say... Until your anger chokes your mouth Wanna spit out ,you can't find the way...can't find the way... 第2段歌詞我寫好了~ : : 我又改了一些小地方 : : 你看一下~這樣字就比較不會重父! : : 主歌應該要寫第2段八~ : : 還有我覺得歌名要改一下~這樣的歌名誰記的住~ : 中間改了一點 -- 就像剛受傷的傷口一樣血腥,加上雙倍的勇敢,更不會有任何事能將我們打倒 我們是台北EMO POP PUNK團八三夭! http://tw.club.yahoo.com/clubs/CKSHMC3-831/ PTT版/Club831 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.230.40.109 ※ 編輯: uplee 來自: 61.230.42.220 (11/28 23:00) ※ 編輯: uplee 來自: 61.230.42.220 (11/28 23:00)
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