給劉逼!

看板Club831作者 (璞你老母)時間18年前 (2006/11/26 23:50), 編輯推噓1(100)
留言1則, 1人參與, 最新討論串1/4 (看更多)
The Man Who Trapped... (In His Depress) I can see through your pretend You fake a smile and try to fade away...just fade away... It's the blood bursts like your tears Ignore the suffer,walk away ...but walk away... You fall and destroy , trapped in your depress You scream with no breathe , I can't hear you say! And you wipe up all your tears Just tell me that your're Okay...(your're Okay...your're Okay...) You hide the dark inside your pain Turn around and say you're Okay...(your're Okay...your're Okay...) So hard to say...so hard to say... I know you are not Okay You just drown inside your pain... 我又改了一些小地方 你看一下~這樣字就比較不會重父! 主歌應該要寫第2段八~ 還有我覺得歌名要改一下~這樣的歌名誰記的住~ -- 就像剛受傷的傷口一樣血腥,加上雙倍的勇敢,更不會有任何事能將我們打倒 我們是台北EMO POP PUNK團八三夭! http://tw.club.yahoo.com/clubs/CKSHMC3-831/ PTT版/Club831 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.230.27.7 ※ 編輯: uplee 來自: 61.230.27.7 (11/27 00:29) ※ 編輯: uplee 來自: 61.230.27.7 (11/27 00:30) ※ 編輯: uplee 來自: 61.230.27.7 (11/27 00:54)

11/27 10:23, , 1F
這樣看起來好像比較順~第二段我也再想想
11/27 10:23, 1F
文章代碼(AID): #15QRVJ4E (Club831)
討論串 (同標題文章)
以下文章回應了本文
18年前, 11/27
完整討論串 (本文為第 1 之 4 篇):
1
1
18年前, 11/26
18年前, 11/27
18年前, 11/28
2
2
18年前, 11/29
文章代碼(AID): #15QRVJ4E (Club831)