[心得] 夜光第9集心得(雷)
很高興推文的討論不少,
而且都算是理性的分享
感覺大家都很入戲地看完了^^
作者: youngzi (youngzi) 看板: F_Naohito
標題: [心得] 夜光第9集心得(雷)
時間: Mon Dec 14 10:19:19 2009
※ [本文轉錄自 Japandrama 看板]
作者: youngzi (youngzi) 看板: Japandrama
標題: [心得] 夜光第9集心得(雷)
時間: Thu Dec 10 23:42:48 2009
雷,空幾行
看到夜光第9集,真的很想嘆氣啊
前面還好好鋪陳的劇情
怎麼到第9集,像趕下班似的
因為只剩一集,把所有想說的話的塞進去
想要探討太多面向,卻又沒有好好地著墨處理
所以一整個轉折太快,轉折處理太粗糙
所以造成了令人婉惜的最終回
可以理解編導想塑造一個不絶對是壞人的佐山
而是男女兩邊慾望的交織所造成了悲劇
如果編劇只單純處理這個部份
最後佐山因為證據
或因為還帶著對幸子或福地的愛而被定罪
那也還算是四平八穩地結束
但最後2集加入了佐山的母親
就有些理不清了
前面幾集對於母親的愛鋪陳地不夠
最後的轉折就太快而不夠有說服力了
如果在病房裡和母親再多一些戲
對於佐山小時候再多一點描寫
甚至和福地或對於幸子的感情再多一些鋪陳...
最後都會好得多
桑山律師那邊也是
對於福地愧疚的點,也只鋪陳了一半
唯一寫得讓人欣慰的只有女檢查官吧
偵辦過程保持專業、尊重證據和證人
也許如果佐山是被她定罪
還讓人感覺好一些
寫完這些,整理了一些思緒
終於才對於第9集的不甘心稍微放下了一點
雖然編導收尾不佳
但整部節奏緊湊
劇本想探討人性、慾望的複雜,及讓人省思的深度,
以及演員們演出的精釆和入味
都是值得一看的
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