Re: [疑問] 想請大家幫個忙

看板Cheer (陳綺貞)作者marsu (＊Cheer&takako＊大心＊)時間19年前 (2006/11/27 00:17)推噓2(2推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《friendalvin (L'Alvin毛毛)》之銘言： : 因為我有一堂課英文聽講，老師要大家上台介紹一個事物三分鐘 : 於是我想介紹老師給大家認識 : 剛剛寫好了介紹稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多錯誤 : 希望大家能幫我指正一下 : My Favorite Singer Cheer : Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陳綺 : 貞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she 我第一個想到的是 creative takes plays : write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other writes : singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and singers(to sing可省) concerts較通俗? : they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she an : performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is person : like a picture”. : Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse likes : inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also : like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some likes XXXX : articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just writing : like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to : do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much. with? : Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^was studying/studied : Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her sing? : voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening makes and XXXX very much to listen : in midnight at? : I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too. : And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you. : 我真的英文很差><... : 請大家多多指正（可以偷偷的笑我沒關係 > <".... 我很努力寫了）哈我英文也不好啦只能改一下文法的小錯誤整體就不動了不知道你年紀也不能亂改哈有問號的地方是我也不太確定是不是一定要那樣用還得請版上有外文系的強者出來幫你囉 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 202.178.206.183 ※ 編輯: marsu 來自: 202.178.206.183 (11/27 00:28)