[翻譯]Pull Me Under (補注釋)

看板DreamTheater作者coolfly (無知是謊言的幫兇)時間17年前 (2007/07/25 08:14)推噓3(3推 0噓 0→)

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拖我下沉 Dream Theater Lost in the sky Clouds roll by and I roll with them Arrows fly Seas increase and then fall again 迷失在天空雲層捲動流過我與它們共同流轉箭矢疾飛海潮增長隨即再度墜落 This world is spinning around me This world is spinning without me Every day send future to past Every breath leaves me one less to my last 世界在我週遭旋轉世界沒了我照樣旋轉每日都是把未來送往過去每次呼吸都是削減我的生命 Watch the sparrow falling Gives new meaning to it all If not today nor yet tomorrow then some other day 看見麻雀墜落讓一切又有新意義如果不是今天或是明天便是未來某一天註1 I'll take seven lives for one And then my only father's son As sure as I did ever love him I am not afraid 我會以七命償一命註2 其後是我親父之子儘管我確定自己深愛他我絲毫無懼註3 This world is spinning around me The whole world keeps spinning around me All life is future to past Every breath leaves me one less to my last 世界在我週遭旋轉整個世界持續在我週遭轉個不停整整一生都是葬送未來每次呼吸都是削減我的生命 Pull me under Pull me under Pull me under I'm not afraid All that I feel is honor and spite All I can do is set it right 拖我下沉，拖我下沉拖我下沉，我無懼我只感到光榮與怨恨我唯有使一切復歸原位註4 Dust fills my eyes Clouds roll by and I roll with them Centuries cry Orders fly and I fall again 塵土矇蔽我的雙眼雲層捲動流過我與它們共同流轉百代同嚎秩序灰飛而我再度墜落 This world is spinning inside me The whole world is spinning inside of me Every day sends future to past Every step brings me closer to my last 世界在我體內旋轉整個世界都在我體內轉動每日都是把未來送往過去每個步伐都帶我更接近我的盡頭 Pull me under Pull me under Pull me under I'm not afraid Living my life too much in the sun Only until your will is done 拖我下沉，拖我下沉拖我下沉，我無懼就讓我在烈日下生活太久吧註5 直到你願望實現 Oh that this too… too solid flesh… would melt… 噢，這太…… 太堅固的肉體…… 將消融分解而……註6 （高仕艷　譯） [註1]Pull Me Under的靈感來自莎翁四大悲劇之一的哈姆雷特。此段疑似典出哈姆雷特之台詞”There's a speciall Prouidence in the fall of a sparrow. If it be now, 'tis not to come: if it bee not to come, it will bee now: if it be not now; yet it will come.”（一隻麻雀死，也是天命。命中注定是現在，便不能在將來；如不在將來，必定在現在；如不在現在，將來總要來。） [註2]哈姆雷特之父死後至哈姆雷特死前，總共死了大臣、奧菲莉亞、羅可、葛夫、王后、賴爾蒂斯、國王，正好是七個人。 [註3]此言應是指自我了斷。 [註4]此句與以下兩句，皆為《哈姆雷特》第一幕中的台詞。此為哈姆雷特從父王的鬼魂口中得知，父親是遭叔父毒殺後所言：”The time is out of ioynt: Oh cursed spight, that euer I was borne to set it right.” （這時代是全盤的錯亂；啊！可恨的冤孽！我生不辰，竟要我來糾正！） [註5]哈姆雷特尚不知父親死因時，對今王：「你臉上罩著愁雲。」一話回答道：’” Not so my Lord, I am too much i'th' Sun.” （不，陛下。我太陽曬得太多了。） [註6]哈姆雷特見父死母嫁，有感於世事之污穢，不免有悲憤輕生之意，遂言：” Oh that this too too solid Flesh, would melt, thaw, and resolue it selfe into a Dew.” （噢，我願這太、太堅固的肉體將消融分解而成露水。）以上《哈姆雷特》台詞中譯乃參考梁實秋先生之譯本。 -- 「如果我沒有死，我要讓全天下的女人都嫉妒妳，因為我要對妳很好很好。」　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　－－施明耀 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.163.150.234